Comments on: ‘Joyful Sorrow’: Chapter One – Midnight Music http://emptiness.spilt-milk.org/eve-fiction/js-chapter1/ an EVE Online blog... Mon, 21 Dec 2009 19:32:01 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.6 hourly 1 By: Mynxee http://emptiness.spilt-milk.org/eve-fiction/js-chapter1/comment-page-1/#comment-231 Mynxee Fri, 09 Jan 2009 08:28:56 +0000 http://emptiness.spilt-milk.org/?p=244#comment-231 A welcome new vintage for the EVE fiction tasting community...expressive, complex, smooth...clearly meant to be savored slowly. Looking forward to the second glass....errr...I mean, chapter. A welcome new vintage for the EVE fiction tasting community…expressive, complex, smooth…clearly meant to be savored slowly. Looking forward to the second glass….errr…I mean, chapter.

]]> By: PsycheDiver http://emptiness.spilt-milk.org/eve-fiction/js-chapter1/comment-page-1/#comment-230 PsycheDiver Fri, 09 Jan 2009 06:51:53 +0000 http://emptiness.spilt-milk.org/?p=244#comment-230 That's was pretty good! One criticism (and I give these to help a fellow writer, as I hope writers will help me), it's a little verbose. Looking forward to more. That's was pretty good!
One criticism (and I give these to help a fellow writer, as I hope writers will help me), it's a little verbose.

Looking forward to more.

]]> By: CrazyKinux http://emptiness.spilt-milk.org/eve-fiction/js-chapter1/comment-page-1/#comment-229 CrazyKinux Fri, 09 Jan 2009 06:42:34 +0000 http://emptiness.spilt-milk.org/?p=244#comment-229 Looking forward to the 2nd chapter mate! Looking forward to the 2nd chapter mate!

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